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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. I think It is Very difficult When the one You love Dies young I look At your portrait Done on Imported ivory When we were In France Oh Mary . . . Nothing now Ever after Will be enough . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, This is very fine. I've never been there, but I'm sure what you say is true. Bobby |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have always been an intriguing poet, John, but there's a new light cast on your pennings for me lately. I like that you don't dictate the meaning(s), and like the masters, you do not draw the lines, but emphasize shadow and light. You're an interesting person...I like.  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I like this John... very much Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
great longing in your voice...great love in your heart...great yearning in your mind...exquisite emotion in an excellent write |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY well done ... serious applause!! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
great words of love. yann |
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