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Open Poetry #43

I Keep On Keeping On

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-11-01 01:43 PM

I Keep On Keeping On

I do have the patience
Somehow I find the time
As I pour heart and soul
Into yet another rhyme

I believe in possibilities
Knowing its all up to me
Assurance I give myself
It's the only way to be

I also find persistence
As I keep on keeping on
It's a new day tomorrow
With yesterday gone

I am able to persevere
Having the coping ability
As I journey through life
I shall keep being me

Hope©2008

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2008-11-01 01:54 PM

Not only beautifully constructed but very positive in it's content. Keep being you and I will keep reading each time you rhyme and even when you don't. Wonderful read.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-11-01 04:19 PM

Yo dear HopeS,

This is a beautiful poem. I'm sure it is true, and I want you to keep doing it.

Love Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-11-01 07:46 PM

Hope... this is a very beautiful and positive poem... as lovely as you... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-11-01 08:05 PM

not just a great message, but nice form, and hope permeating each line...love the optimism found in your words

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-11-02 11:29 AM

A beauty HopeS!

ARCTIC WIND

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