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Open Poetry #43

The Chosen Hour

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2008-10-31 04:34 PM

What of this joy that in the eternal
Never again set the sun of day
No gathering work or measure undone
With my children forever boundless play
And when I consider intimate
Simple pleasures so desperate attune
With all those nights I dream of your touch
While roses unattended still bloom
And I long the chosen hour nearing
When I imagine your sweet charms the more
And speak these words but for only your ears
"My dear, I love you!" Then at the tender door
Of eternity stand, forever and complete I sigh
Till clouds enough the oceans fill
And wash all the tears from the sky

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2008-10-31 04:51 PM

Robert, the tenderness is always there in your wonderful gifts. Thank you!

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-10-31 06:01 PM

it is such a tender, feelin write...loved the ending:

"Till clouds enough the oceans fill
And wash all the tears from the sky"

...that's just a nice thought

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-10-31 06:42 PM

Hello my dear friend Robert - so good to read you again! This is a wonderful offering from your heart.. thank you so much for sharing with us here... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2008-11-02 11:10 AM

"... the eternal
Never again ... "

"And speak these words but for only your ears
"My dear, I love you!"

I hope she hears your "desperate" plea and responds in a positive way. I always cheer for "eternal" love to win. *sigh*
Enjoyed

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2008-11-02 11:14 AM

The synergy of souls, after all is done, to be at peace held softly through all of time.
Lovely write. Very much enjoyed.
Welcome back Robert

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