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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
O turbulent river, hundreds of tributaries inflate your waters, tireless meanders remove you from your goal, the feelings sink as insane ships. turbulent river, you ruin hills, words and rains. O turbulent river, it is with relief that I build high dams on your excessive course, I want to make navigable the beauty of your waters. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
fantastic metaphor with excellent images...nice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed reading your thoughts lol  ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a top performance, dear Yann! A keeper! Love, Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yann - Your titles have been catching my eye tonight. Perhaps our hope should be to understand the mind and the reasons why it takes us on the meander rather than attempt to confine it. Let it go free! Helen |
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