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Veni Mortem
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since 2008-07-31
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0 posted 2008-10-29 05:33 PM


“The fourteen year old umbilical cord…

Kept in a chest, buried under the floorboards…

It now begins to stir…

Necrophagous hordes, repelled by the stench…

Unwilling to die a day too early…

They flee from the sudden movement…”


Removed from the chest…
A heart or a hope?

Indigenous fear and a war-torn dress
Scorned blood of a cloth, tears composed all alone
Yet they’re still not dried, after four foul years
And a decade of decay, with a promise undone

So a circle is portrayed of a thin, red dust
Five lines and a hymn for a Lord, unknown
And a curse, muttered softly, by a thousand kings
Passed down, through a book, to this still small girl

Kept away, and alone, in the creaking of her rotting home
In disgust, in despair, desperate acts are made
Her lament for forgiveness, sentenced now to life
In a hell. Self created, self-sufficient.

And a dimming star, wished upon.
Watch it die without a thing fulfilled…

“Hopeless…?”

As the leaves plummet from the summit
Of the trees, now black with sorrow
Ancient texts are read aloud
Enshrouded in a hovering gloom

Her lips are dry and cracked
Without a pause, she quotes the scripts
And at the ending of this book
There lies a grim foretaste of death

No longer can she suffer through
The pain the world has given her

“Why…?”

Though she may be filled with hatred
See the pages all are stained with tears
This sorrow of no one to love…
“…Shall spread to everyone…”

Abandoned as a child…
She was forced to live her life alone
Her origin unknown
To the vicious world around her.

All the parents told their stories
Of that evil girl without a past
“A child without a mother
Born from devils,  plague and dust.”

And their offspring listened closely
“Do not play with that peculiar girl.
You wouldn’t want to touch a thing so strange,
Deranged, a range of dangers.”

Yes, condemned she was
By all the children and adults alike
Her haunting golden eyes were feared and scoffed
Her heart was pulverized

She didn’t want to give it in
She didn’t want to change to what they called her…

“No… I’m not… I’m not evil…”

But the hate intensified
And all her fears, they multiplied…
Until there was no single moment
That she didn’t wish they all would die
Within her hands, between her teeth
Beneath her feet, she prayed to God:

“I beg of you… give me the strength…
I want to see them all removed…
I do not want your childish hands to touch their fate!
Deliver them to me…”


Yet there was no hope she could find
And nothing in this world for her
The only thing she had was hatred
And her rotting home…

Through all the pain and loneliness
She forced her way through every day
And wept through every night
The anger welling up inside

But then one eve she found her hope
A visitation deep within a dream
A demon stood before her
Tall and ominous…

She gazed upon it’s wrinkled, withered,
Shriveled face in awe and wonder
Questioning just what it was
And why it showed itself to her

“The fourteen years of pain and growth
My heart is buried with my hope…
And death is all I wish for… not of me but of the world, you see…”


The creature grinned, and as it did
It’s face did crackle, like a splitting tree
It spoke, “I know the thing you want
And I can give that gift to you…”


It chuckled…

“All you have to do… is ensure that you belong to me
And when your time has come… you will let me keep your soul…”


Oh, the child did not take time to ponder
Without wait, she answered:

“No, The Lord is not my father… So then, why should my soul go to Him?
My soul belonged to no one, yes, but now belongs to you.”


So with a nod, she did accept the offer
And without a moment lost
She was uplifted from her dream…
“Reborn…”

The book is closed, left in the rain
The severed cord creates a stain
On the floor of her rotting home…
It inches and it grows

Fourteen years and the fermentation…
The knowledge and will, but without the strength
Until now…  
The world that shunned her… “shall never be forgiven…”

“The day has come…”

“On this lovely night… when The Line is faded deep
And there is no separation of the living and the dead…
When the moon’s four eyes are open wide
And peering through the starburst sky
The devils walk the earth and cry
Requiring a name…

So hear me through this thinning Line
I give you substance with your pain
I now invite you to this realm
Existence through your titles…

This now becomes a night of feasting!
Shed your skins and vitalize your might!
Devour all the living,
Let the world be terrorized.

They all forgot your names
But I return them all to you…”


The cord, it scratches, tears a hole
Deep in the soil of the placement of her rotting home…
The barrier is torn and the festival begins…
The girl, she softly smiles…
  
  
  
Five fine lines and a mouth intertwined

Thine eyes are aligned with the stars reassigned

Enshrined in demise with the sun, supine  

Declining to the dining with the dead consigned

Inclined to break the spline where the buried ones pine

And this world shall bow it’s head for thee…

  
  

[This message has been edited by Veni Mortem (10-29-2008 07:01 PM).]

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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2008-10-29 08:03 PM


Intense
Welcome to Passions

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
2 posted 2008-10-29 08:13 PM


Wow.
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2008-10-29 08:35 PM


Yo Veni Mortem,

This is very good work.  Happy Samhuinn.

Bobby

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