Open Poetry #43 |
an autumn clam bake |
Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
an autumn clam bake a dozen men and only four women ferments an odd mixture at a clam bake when men cook and drink beer outdoors all day as autumn breezes cool in candle light the night brews effervescent flirtations when playful libations are passed around tiny paper cups filled to the brim produce no sound when tapped together sloshing out amber tequila for cheers laughter is heard when the bearded biker after watching challenging drink battles asks a female for his turn at a shot cool splashes with warm unexpected licks creates a leavening that excites peaks revealing that paper cups don't clink they squish Janette from "the clam bake" 2005 always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
flirty and fun! Oh how I want to be at that clam bake instead of sitting here at home Thanks for taking me there The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"the night brews effervescent flirtations" just love this phrase |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...was Elvis there? James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sounds like a fun time~ getting together is always fun! ARCTIC WIND |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Janette - nice, I really enjoy clambakes. Haven't been to one in a while though, miss going to one... BC |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Ceinwyn - I have only been to one clam bake, and oddly enough it took place in St Louis, not on the coast. And it was ... fun. Thanks got commenting. Steavenr - Ah! That was one of my favorite word pairings, too. How did ya know? Thanks for making me smile. JamesMichael - Elvis? Nah, just that ZZ Topp look-a-like guy. *wink wink* You are too funny! But then I was attempting to be "funny" in this piece, too. Thanks. Artic Wind - Yes, fun! Surprisingly us land-lock folks, with some ingenuity, enjoy clam bakes, too. Thank you for your read and comment. Bill Charles - me too! Hopefully there will be more clam bakes, but it is a challenge for us mid-westerners. Glad this sparked happy memories for you and thanks for the comment. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Are we having fun yet?? Really cute poem, Janette~ I'm so liking the party favor, flavors. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
BluesSerenade - Yes, big fun. The "party favors" were varied, but the tartness of an added lime seemed to help with the flavor. *wink* Thank you for telling me that you liked this one. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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