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Introspection |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Introspection A wide moon fills the candlelit window, where wisps of time trail out through cracks in the soul. On this night of hope and no pretensions, one must wonder whether such glorious light will shine within... to reveal some remaining choice and purpose, in a ‘life’ of far too many wayward dreams, and numberless paths not taken. ---b. e. adams (7/18/08) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Relate well to this, my friend...I'm sure we all do....well done.. j. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"where wisps of time trail out through cracks in the soul." Applause! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem is a poignant one, and I so enjoyed the sentiment. beautifully done, dreampoet~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bruce~ My friend, this is a penning of beauty and wisdom~ wisps of time Adore the very thought of this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You are touching my heart, Bruce. And filling some of the cracks in my soul with the light that you share in your poetry. Alison |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oops! I have just said that Certainties was my favourite of your poems, but now I am not so sure! Whilst I feel your sadness in this and I don't like you to be sad, I like the personal touch to your latest poems, and honour your invitation to us, your readers, into your soul. - Owl |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bruce.. this is so beautiful...love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This work is almost as beautiful as those Endless Mountains, Poet. And just as eternal. |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
ooh I like this one - very deep and thoughtful. i can identify. xxxjanetxxx |
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