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Open Poetry #43
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tsu
Junior Member
since 2008-10-20
Posts 29
u.k.
0 posted 2008-10-25 12:29 PM


You are
a
waterfall
of
fluent pleasure
beneath my
questing
mouth -

Insistent lips
measure
tumultuous
depths,
eliciting
unreserved
response.

Revelling
in this
joint exploration,
cascading into
eachother,

We
fall.
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2008-10-25 12:39 PM

Welcome to Passions.
This is fantastic.
steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058
2 posted 2008-10-25 12:59 PM

Welcome to PiP...love your form, love your style...masterful write
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-10-25 09:00 PM

Such a poetic touch to this first post at pip!!!!!

WELCOME TO PIP
     

ARCTIC WIND
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