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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
she whispers low, a hushed embrace as if to sing a siren's song "come, listen to my muse-borne voice" a ballad sweet with words so strong I stretch the sistine finger-reach as though she surely speaks for God and wonder how I could face my quill I bow my mind with a simple nod "I surrender", I softly say for there's no inspire without her voice my mind steps out...she comes to play when she knows I've finally made my choice the words are penned with blazing speed and when I wake, 'tis those I read for when I wake, she takes her leave |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Steaven, this is great poetry, exquisite sensitivity and deep modesty, I enjoyed very much and shared with emotion. best wishes yann |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
Why does sex surely speak for God more than the intellect? I enjoyed your read. "The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Dreams are a powerful music in the heart. Representative of a wish, working to be born into reality. Enjoy your muse-ic.  |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
she whispers low, a hushed embrace as if to sing a siren's song "come, listen to my muse-borne voice" a ballad sweet with words so strong ... "I surrender", I softly say for there's no inspire without her voice" Wow! The call of the Siren, I just adore this type of mythical figure, and you have put a wonderful twist on it here. And please know that I have read this piece several times, and I just now realized that I forgot to respond to let you know how much I enjoyed it. Oppps! I appologize. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
yann, thank you so much for reading and commenting...modesty? I can only say that I am proud of that. Callista, not sure, my friend, not sure TD, I think I wait for your comments sometimes just so I can see something fresh in what I have written. Thanks for being so kind. Janette, thank you kindly and certainly no apologies necessary...I know that I do that all the time |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
steavenr...Enjoyed very much. Maybe that muse of your's will stay awhile during the time you are awake. Once I was sleeping and a poem came to me, I woke up grabbed pen and paper and wrote it in about 10 minutes, it was about my 2 grand daughters, so I gave then a copy long ago...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Steaven that is such a great poem, I really enjoyed this one. Take care my friend. Lindsay |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Paul, nothing like leaving special words to your grandkids...know the feeling...appreciate your very nice comments Lindsay, not only honored by your gracious remarks, but I thank you, sir |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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