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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Air is the most amazing thing; it holds the core of who you are and suffers one to know of love not really, really, here. And really, really, my despair at knowing love’s not here has closed the valves, stopped the flow, and caused a blockage in the heart. But really, really, blockages are simply there until they’re not and this I know because the air whispers love into despair. I listen sometimes ardently and turn my mind into the air but really, really, I can’t say who speaks the words I do not hear. But really, really, words can mean sometimes what they don’t so into feel I slide my mind hoping there to know the plot. But really, really, there’s no plot that alters life’s so merry lot for I am here and you are there and love’s not really here! Helen / 24 October 2008 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Love is neither here or there ~ Love is evertywhere! Mind you, it can be in rather limited quantity in some area!  But, Hellen, my friend, wherever you go it is in ample supply because you carry love within you and shine it out upon the world! May the love that you radiate be returned to you ten-fold! Loveya! Linda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Ditto to Linda's response dear Helen, I think she was spot on with her response. Take care dear Lady. Love Lindsay |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks, Linda and Lindsay! Love is indeed everywhere - everywhere in the air and we breathe it in but most times don't feel it going down, down, down, into that place of knowing.  Helen |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
Ahhhh, the mystery of here and there! So aptly penned! Thank you. "The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ, Moves on: nor all thy Piety nor Wit Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line.." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Air is the most amazing thing;...." I KNOW huh? It's cool in the fall and it's freezy meezy in the winter and it's warm in the spring and hot in the summer! Just amazing, **sigh** Thank you for this  ARCTIC WIND |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"so into feel I slide my mind" Great line! Take a deep breath, and sniff around ... you will feel the love. Enjoyed! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Yes Linda said it perfectly as she always does breathe deep, and fill your lungs with love  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks everyone for reading and for commenting. Just when I think I really understand 'love' it escapes me. I guess because it likes being everywhere. Helen |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
=) nice... |
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