Open Poetry #43 |
Another day, another truth |
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Another day, another truth a war is declared in Georgia, a train become derailed in Slovakia, a neighbour jumped from a bridge. Another day, another talk, you changed ideas about a dress, you lied to your children, you hang up the phone. Another day, another truth, You missed an exposition about Manet, you forgot my birthday, You voted democrat against republican. Another day, another truth for all the world around us, another day, another truth except for you and me loving each other. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Excellent You're getting very impressive . . . This is another one I would like with your permission to add to my File of poems by others. Bravo John . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Yann, Never lie to children, tell them the truth. Always vote Democrat. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you John, I'm glad you addd this one...Thank you for the very kind comment.... yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Bobby for the comment, I would have so much like to vote during these elections....Thank you too for the very good work. yann |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
an exquisite expression of the staying power of love...loved your choices of comparison |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A bit sad Yann but I enjoyed it. I wish you better luck in the near future. Lindsay |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Steaven, I'm glad you appreciated the poem. best wishes yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Lindsay, I can reassure you, this is a work of imagination, I have not so much troubles in my life, only few, I'm glad you made a kind comment. yann |
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