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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * * * Otherworldly tunes * * * Otherworldly tunes wrap me in veils of mystery, feathery lightness lifts me from the ground. Strings of light pierce across the ether, translucent rainbow hues tinge my skin. From a bottomless sacred pond of love you gather dewdrops for the ritual of dawn and sprinkle beauty upon the corolla of my soul. * * * |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..the things you do with bubbles and love..enjoyed it ms |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Love, Eric |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Love this, Margherita, and more particularly because I think I'm living in a bubble at the moment. I won't let anyone break it either! Love Helen |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, This is a beautiful thought and poem. I like it loads. Love Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear D., indeed I never tire to blow bubbles with my grandson. Thank you, dear Eric, it’s nice to have you visit here! Dear Helen, thank you! To live in a bubble sometimes may be necessary to feel safe. Stay happy in there and enjoy the rainbow colors! May the weather be serene ...  Thank you, dear Bobby, for liking it loads. Nice expression! Love to all, Margherita  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now, I've read many tear-jerkers, but this one is a smile provocateur. (Smile jerker just doesn't sound right.)  Much love to you M'maggie may! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
great lines...cool write...superb ending |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Margherita, there is such a lightness reading your poem....the choice of words is delightful and express deep spirituality...I enjoyed very much... yann |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mystical Margherita, you write pure magic! There has not been a single poem of yours that I have read, where I was not in awe of your talent and your spirit!   Angelo Terrestre  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Magick is just the right word. Ida |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marghertia...Great write, enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I enjoyed all your replies so much, dear Poet friends, thank you! I am off to visit my daughter. See you soon. Enjoy your time! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Margherita, I totally agree with all those comments, You wrote it well. Love Lindsay |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Oh! This makes me wish to go and play this afternoon in bubbles. Very fun read! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita!!!!!! ~Beautiful Writing! I am saving this one, like I did for many others of yours~ ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Lindsay, Janette and Michael, for your kind comments. Love, Margherita |
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