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Fly by NIght
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Fly by NIght |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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She spreads her wings spanning higher ground for a branch that will hold providing shelter from the storm instead of becoming one with the run off. Where a fly by night flies by night slapping flies on the wall and time gets away behind clouds and assorted cloaks that fall from grace. While banging his head against window sills feigning a jilted lover makes me wonder about trees that need watering not the ones wrapped in cellophane for some kind of perverse pleasure that flies by night. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
With their magic branches trees tap the sky transforming our tears into glorious cloaks of the nightstorm *********************** the little blonde birdie will shake off the storms afterall afterall |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write! Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms bluezy, it sure is fun to watch you dance. Enjoyed this, I think I know her. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I enjoy this, But I think I need a Thesaurus to help me understand it. Or maybe It just needs to be, to be enjoyed. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The measureable parts of relationships seem to get much more complicated with each moment of passing time. In many ways I can relate to what you have penned here. I don't know that they are the same as yours but I can relate to my own. I will definitely have to reread a few times. Very much enjoyed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I detect a certain sinister sound in this composition, but the main tone I perceive is unmistakably related to conscious feminine power. Great write. Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"assorted cloaks that fall from grace" interesting, thought-provoking perspective |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - enjoyed reading this, you do have a way with words... BC |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderful!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"She spreads her wings spanning higher ground for a branch that will hold providing shelter from the storm instead of becoming one with the run off." Bluesy gal - This I understand only too well. I don't know much but I do know that the branch was found. Keep writing because you do it so well - you always have, you know.  Helen |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh I like the way you move from one meaning to another, and you keep me hopping along behind you. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"She spreads her wings spanning higher ground for a branch that will hold" ~ As soon as I started reading, the above lines had already given me pause in ponder. I too have done likewise, but alas, there have been times when the branch did not hold... May your wings keep you flying high and free and above the madding crowds!  Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sounds like a strong woman, having her say, to me. Saying it very well. Ida |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"and time gets away behind clouds and assorted cloaks that fall from grace." Wow, so many juicy lines in this write! "about trees that need watering not the ones wrapped in cellophane" Dang! lady I just read this entire thing again ... mercy ... for me this piece radiates with double entendre and boundless interpretations. Wow, I definitely adore reading something that does not limit one's mind with boundaries. Enjoyed! Excellent write! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed, my friend, in particular the first stanza ... and of course the new (to me anyway) picture.... jimmy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You need to fly by more often  Happy New Year, Lor M |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I agree with Maureen. You should rest your wings and treat us with something to read. |
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