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morning kiss
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morning kiss |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
he sits alone at early dawn as rays like arrows pierce the trees with bean-filled cup in wearied hand and quiver full of sorrowed pleas a sullen smile paints his face the rising sun its circuit starts the warmth of hope begins its bloom as chariot-sun hurls its darts the grass is licked with morning's dew a cold, sweet kiss with frozen lips evening's pearls are left to shine as nature's glow like nectar drips and peace hovers close like the meadow's mist while the sun bends nigh for its morning kiss |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Raising my cup to you. I was there, watching from here. Nice write.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
steavenr - nice write, enjoyed the read... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Lovely morning very poetic....It made me feel the dew and the fresh air and so many other things...Thanks for the lively sensations. yann |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, nothing like a fresh cup of java to watch the morning sun's rays break through the trees...glad you felt like you were there...thank you for your kindness Bill, so glad you found the read enjoyable...appreciate your comments |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
yann, love it when a write speaks to the reader's senses...thank you for your kind comments |
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