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can't wait for the rain--inspired by Marchmadness
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can't wait for the rain--inspired by Marchmadness |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
can't wait for the rain, my love, can't wait can't find time for the tears to flow, can't wait no time for cleansing, no time for refreshing can't wait for the rain, my love, can't wait my heart beats to the patter of the drizzled rain consoling, slyly beating, feigning its rhythm like the gentle spin of a weather vane in a soft summer breeze at the dusk of day can't tell the diff'rence 'tween the heart-flow and the pitter-pattern of the clouded tears sounding like the soft rain's gentle breath still can't wait for the rain, my love, still can't wait and the wise man cries what the sage writes down can't wait for the rain, my love, can't wait |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Steaven.. you write with passion and beauty...I'm so pleased that Marchmadness inspired such beautiful words from you... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What more can a girl from Oregon ask for than to inspire a poem called "Can't wait for the rain." I am honored to have inspired your beautiful words. Ida |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Loved the rhythm of this one, as you do such justice to the patter of the rain. Lovely inspired write.  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
RDB, you are so very kind and gracious with your generous comments...glad you liked it Ida, simply my pleasure, but then again, your words captured my thoughts...should have challenged you to follow your words to fruition...now that would have been good TD, if you think that the rhythm captured the rhythm of the rain, then I can feel like I succeeded...surely appreciate your kind comments |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed this, Steaven! When we feel we can't wait for something then we are forced to learn the lesson of patience - just seems to work that way I think. Helen |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Helen, oh, the lessons of patience...if we could all be guilty of learning...thanks for reading and commenting |
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