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Open Poetry #43

An Ghaoth Anea

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-10-17 05:23 PM

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Last night
As then a full
Autumn moon
Slowly moved
Its silent way
Above across
A starry sky

I stood out
Alone
On the balcony
In hand a glass
Of our favorite
White wine

There was
A scent
Of something
In the evening air
Peach blossoms
Beyond reason
A delusion of the mind

That’s what it gets
For unguardedly listening

To heartstrings being played

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2008-10-17 06:01 PM

sigh

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-10-17 06:10 PM

The scent of peach blossoms out of season becomes more real than that of Spring, because the heart's voice is the voice of truth.

Very beautiful, John.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2008-10-17 10:23 PM

Haun Yi - much meaning I read in this, love this line\

'To heartstrings being played'

BC

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2008-10-18 04:50 PM

Thank you for sharing this delicious both poem and moment described....

yann

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2008-10-18 08:19 PM

this write definitely breathes the reader in...you transform the reader into the very experience...nicely done

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2008-10-20 08:19 AM

One of your best... and that's saying a lot!

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