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Red giant meeting
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Red giant meeting |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 *** Red giant meeting *** Walking at the pace of my favorite dreams I lifted my head to stop dead in my tracks as the rising full moon, huge and blushing like a red giant, punched me right into the center of my solar plexus. Gasping for air I swelled and stretched to his magnetic pull expanding my surface becoming an endless ocean shivering to the moonlight fingers’ irresistible touch. Pulled into the moon’s domain I saw you as you approached me through the portal of its halo, beckoning so powerfully in between two pine trees, expressly chosen to feature in this uniquely charming play. Caught by magic’s performance we then moved into each other while the red giant welcomed us within his knowing amiable smile and hid us upon his glowing face where we still continue our dance. *** |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Caught by magic’s performance we then moved into each other while the red giant welcomed us within his knowing amiable smile and hid us upon his glowing face where we still continue our dance. Dear Margherita... that red giant is a very powerful force!! love this my friend ... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
Magical are your words, they sounds mellow yet sharp. Another piece that shall weave another memory around it, once the reader completes. clever talks delay friendship! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I saw you as you approached me through the portal of its halo, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I love that, and the fact that we all share the same moon, and are touched by the light of her magic. Wonderful work, you are such an amazing poet, Margherita~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, This is a good poem for the season. Indeed we are fast approaching that moony season, when all the little werewolves are hungry for candy. I usually pass out about 125+ candy bars on Halloween. The one thing we do have here in the hood is hordes of kids. In twenty years I’ve never had my windows soaped, and I’ve only been egged once. I think the egging was some kind of mistake. Such things happen. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - I love the moon and all it is. You write touchingly about what can happen under it... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enchantinging poem, Margharita. Ida |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Margherita that is a lovely post, A big hug my dear. enjoyed. Lindsay |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
simply lovely...perhaps this is the season for inspiration from that gorgeous moon (lovely picture, btw) enjoyed the write... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow. Make that, Wow.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margherita - I really do love what you see when you look at the moon. Beautiful write as only you can do. Helen |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Deeply moving and beautiful Margherita. Love, Eric |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
dear Margherita, it is one of your best, it is really magical and tremendously enjoyable to read...have a nice poetic day yann |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
LOVE IT!! Happy Fall ARCTIC WIND |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautifully written and I especially liked the power of your images in this. I really liked that the dance continues at the end as it should always continue. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I remember as a kid sleeping out under the full moon. It was so bright in the mountain air you could see almost as easy as full daylight. Always loved the moon. Thanks for the memories. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, my friends, thank you so much for your time and for your loving comments! Love and joy, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ohhh what a love story with that old man red moon as accomplice beautiful Margherita |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, as a delightful accomplice, dear Kate, thank you! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Wow is right! The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I am putting this to my "fav poems" list!!!!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Ceinwyn and dear Michael, for the generous comments. Love, Margherita |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Margherita, Dance on, I say, dance on! Lovely. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my dear Dolphina, your poetic talent, passion, powers of observation, and passion continue to astound me. You are pip's cosmic love queen!   muchoLinda |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
My Dear Margherita i like images of moon thank you for your words i'ts really touch our hearts we hope more My love nourzihane |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Larry, dear Linda mio Angelo Terrestre and dear Nourzihane, you made my day. Wishing you a beautiful week! Love, Margherita  |
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