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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-10-18 12:07 PM


Bones knows who hates him.  

It’s those snotty people
from the burbs.  
The ones with their noses
held high in the air.  

They don’t want to smell Bones,
Bones smells like the street,
like the city they hate.

They don’t want to have
anything to do with the street
or with Bones.  

They like to think
they care about Bones,
however, they don’t.  

They don’t care at all.  

It’s all a big lie,
an unholy sham.  

They just wish that Bones
would go away,
and leave them alone.

They’d like to see Bones dead,
along with that mirror
he holds up to their face.

Bobby

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2islander2
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1 posted 2008-10-18 04:35 PM


I always ask if better having enemies (we know them) than nobody caring about us....Alas there are nasty (and often stupid) people who think wrong....

thank you for sharing this poem

yann

chopsticks
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2 posted 2008-10-18 05:21 PM


“ Bones knows who hates him. “

But more love him .


ken206573
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3 posted 2008-10-18 05:29 PM


i love your poem. i hope to read even more of it real soon


Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-10-18 06:35 PM


Thanks Yann,

I don't know which is worse, probably being ignored.

Thanks for reading, and for your comments.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2008-10-18 06:36 PM


Thanks dear Chopsticks,

Bones says thanks for that, and sends his greetings.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-10-18 06:37 PM


Thanks Ken206573,

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.  Welcome to the forum.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2008-10-19 08:25 PM


Dear Bobby... I could never hate the Bones' of this world.. all they need is love and hugs... some people in this world aren't loving enough...  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-10-19 09:05 PM


Thanks dear RDB,

Bones says thank you for that.

You are correct, many people could be more understanding of Bones, if they would just think a little bit.

Love Bobby

Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California
9 posted 2008-10-19 09:28 PM


Perhaps Bones should just forget about those who hate him and concentrate on those who love him.
                            Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
10 posted 2008-10-19 09:36 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

That is exactly what Bones did.  It allowed him to survive, stay out of prison, and grow up.

Love Bobby

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