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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2008-10-18 10:01 AM



Dream's Solicitation To The Earth

My hands follow my mind
Imparting gentle reason along your shores
The dalliance of tender exploration moors
My feelings harbored on quiet ground
Long, the laps of recognition
All within my heart comes to fruition
Every touch in epic, whispers deeply down
Set, the stakes of honor bound
It is love I sail into the surfs
Summoning the arms of trees on varied turfs
Blowing on the dunes that mount a welcome mat
Stepping out of safety’s sake, unto new grounding that
Supports the depth of dreams destined to become these scenes
To lie beside the man, dressed in the spirit sewn of all I am
And every sigh, and every sound behemoth to my hand
Set anchor here, the asking and the giving destined where I land

Copyright Kkh 10/18/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2008-10-18 10:44 AM


You have no idea how enjoyable it is reading
you when you write in rhyme and put such an
enjoyable beat to the lines...

Laughter is the chariot?  No wonder I could
not get my flat fixed...

Magnus
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2 posted 2008-10-19 11:33 AM


A gentle bump and nudge...for thuh vanilla
and thuh fudge...

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2008-10-19 01:35 PM


ThisDiamond - Yes, you're writings are a joy to read, enjoyed...

BC

steavenr
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4 posted 2008-10-19 09:09 PM


it seems we are all in agreement--you are a joy to read...love the simple coolness of this line:

"dressed in the spirit sewn of all I am"

...so very well put...standing in awe

Callista
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5 posted 2008-10-19 11:13 PM


Makes me long for a dalliance long my love's shores. This poem "whispers deeply down to me."  

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (10-20-2008 11:09 AM).]

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