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Dream's Solicitation To The Earth
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Dream's Solicitation To The Earth |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Dream's Solicitation To The Earth My hands follow my mind Imparting gentle reason along your shores The dalliance of tender exploration moors My feelings harbored on quiet ground Long, the laps of recognition All within my heart comes to fruition Every touch in epic, whispers deeply down Set, the stakes of honor bound It is love I sail into the surfs Summoning the arms of trees on varied turfs Blowing on the dunes that mount a welcome mat Stepping out of safety’s sake, unto new grounding that Supports the depth of dreams destined to become these scenes To lie beside the man, dressed in the spirit sewn of all I am And every sigh, and every sound behemoth to my hand Set anchor here, the asking and the giving destined where I land Copyright Kkh 10/18/08 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have no idea how enjoyable it is reading you when you write in rhyme and put such an enjoyable beat to the lines... Laughter is the chariot? No wonder I could not get my flat fixed... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A gentle bump and nudge...for thuh vanilla and thuh fudge... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - Yes, you're writings are a joy to read, enjoyed... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
it seems we are all in agreement--you are a joy to read...love the simple coolness of this line: "dressed in the spirit sewn of all I am" ...so very well put...standing in awe |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
Makes me long for a dalliance long my love's shores. This poem "whispers deeply down to me." [This message has been edited by Balladeer (10-20-2008 11:09 AM).] |
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