Open Poetry #43 |
To know love... |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
It was there right in front of our eyes but for whatever reason we didn’t see it or want it badly enough so we bid it farewell and continued on in a blur of lost days and sunless nights until its defiant glare returned to give us another chance and this time we both knew how lucky we were To know love... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Roniece, you rendered this second chance so very well, in such a captivating way that it will remain with me as a delightful impression and a wise reminder too. Very beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Very beautiful, Roniece. I sure remember how that felt. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
dear Roniece, this poem is precious to me and means a lot, I am always puzzled by love even going denying evidence sometimes....Your poem is like a sun ray in automn... have a nice day yann |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
lovely second chance write...enjoyed |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Roniece, somtimes we can't see the forest for the trees but usually when we look a little deeper the picture becomes a little clearer and I am so glad that you found love. Love to you sweet lady. Lindsay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce - a'hhhh yes, knowing love is, well just lovely... BC |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Roniece For a woman who recently said that she couldn't write poetry just now, you are turning out some remarkable stuff. I love this and am happy you share with us. Love, Ali |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
The poem is so realistic and understanding. Your wisdom is well reflected here. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone.. you bring me smiles with your lovely comments... RDB Ali-girl... you are a great inspiration to me! xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
love is wonderful the second time around... ahhh Roniece this is amazing |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Roniece - yes, this is an excellent write. Not many of us get a second chance so consider yourself ... "blessed". Helen |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply superb! loud and long-sustained applause for this fine 'penning'! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear RDB, The thought is there in this poem. To know love is a good thing. Love Bobby |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
How sweet it is!!!!!My fiance asked me out 15 years ago. I said No. We met up again, and are head over heels in love(7 years now). Your words hit home!! Thanks for sharing |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
RDB...Second chances, a blessing that most of us never get, or if we do we are so blinded by pride we never see. Great write, enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I love second chances...they are truly a blessing. Funny, how we think we would never get another chance and when we least expect it..boom it happens Gotta love it!! The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
To know love is indeed a wonderful thing! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I can't believe I haven't clicked on this one!!! ~ Enjoyed the Write Roniece! ARCTIC WIND |
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