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In This Dream
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In This Dream |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“IN THIS DREAM” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I wonder when I sit here and write, lost at times somewhere in dreams, hopeless are all my thoughts within, yet my heart sings with words it seems… A smile written to, or an eye’s twinkle, melodies come forth of rhyme to read, they flow gently out with pen in hand, many from deep within, perhaps buried… When I see a face with its gentle charm, somehow I’m inspired by what I find, I write of you, and one of one again, in this dream, seeing you in my mind… ~~~~ |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A great poem Bill, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
When I see a face with its gentle charm, somehow I’m inspired by what I find, I write of you, and one of one again, in this dream, seeing you in my mind… Sorry Bill I forgot to put this great verse in. Lindsay |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely, Bill. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I love the romance in your words Bill.. this is very beautiful! love RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I love your awareness of your heart tune and you express this so very beautifully with your exquisite romantic touch, dear Bill. A joy to read! Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hi Bill~~ I Love your inspiration, and your romantic muse. What a nice poem to find here this morning!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
LindsayP - thank you for the addition to your reply. It's appreciated for sure... Alison - Thank you Alison... Roniece Dawson-Bruce - You're so kind, thank you much for stopping by for a read... Margherita - Thank you for the words in your reply, they are very gracious... BluesSerenade - At times I wonder where that muse comes from, but I'm very grateful where ever it is from, that's it's there. Glad you enjoyed the read... Thanks again all, BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Very Nice inspiration Charles, I particularly enjoy the last stanza and its thoughtful lines. yann |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
when i read this poem, my heart soared into the heavens. man, you sure know how to write what's in your heart and mind. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
2islander2 - appreciate the kind reply, thank you... ken206573 - I'm happy that this writing touched you, and your heart felt the words. Thank you for stopping by... BC |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
It's a blessing to dream isn't it? Always the romantic, nice to see you regularly on here again |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed your romantic words yet again, Bill. What would life be like without romance - and we can find romance in so many circumstances, faces and places if we choose to look. Helen |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
lot of beauty and insight in this one...enjoyed muchly |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - Yes, it is a blessing to dream, some good, some not so good over the years. Nice to be back, and nice to read your writings... Honeybunch - I believe life would be not well without romance, and it can be found when one lease expects it. steavenr - thank you for your words, and replying to this... BC |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"... my heart sings with words ..." I know this tune well, although often times my pen stumbles on the words. "A smile written to ..." Oh man! I adore that phrase. This read was an enjoyment with a smile. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Janette - glad you enjoyed the words, I know the feeling of when will they come, but they do, and I'm grateful. Thanks for the gracious comments... BC |
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