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Open Poetry #43
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norunnin
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since 2008-10-16
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0 posted 2008-10-17 12:34 PM


as i reach out my hand to grab what was not mine
i heard a message divine
and as the flame licked my hand i reach again
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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2008-10-17 02:13 PM

Seduction or destiny.
Concentrated and penetrating little verve!
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
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2 posted 2008-10-17 10:47 PM

Yo Norunnin,

There you go.  Don't let a little fire stop you from getting what you need.

Bobby
Callista
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since 2008-10-05
Posts 63
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3 posted 2008-10-18 12:18 PM

A perfect and precise depiction of being burned by desire for the divine. It sounds just right.
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