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Write a letter? |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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It’s a challenge I reckon; day three it would be to write a love letter the old fashioned way but time’s an illusion, we only have now and so of my letter I’ll resort to e-mail. But nothing is instant in this density where laboured the breath and slow the body and so of my words I'll think in some depth and speak them now straight into your mind. But mind is devoid of sensory perception dull like a laggard analytically based and so of my words I’ll feel them instead and emotively speak straight into your heart. But of heart I know it’s emotionally challenged and sits like a block of well mixed cement and so of my words I’ll hold them within as something that’s simply not meant to be. But the not meant to be an unfounded notion with no basis in truth or original intent and so of my words I’ll simply decide to pen them on Pip … for the rest of my life. But the rest of my life not long but too long thinks rather just write a letter instead! Helen / 16 October 2008 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and so of my words I’ll feel them instead ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You know I've always been a fan of yours and I am so glad you are here sharing your poetry!! So long as you write your heart, you're good and I'm good too, because I am always flooded with feelings after reading you. Hugs, Helen~ |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I shouldn't admit this, but I come to work, a little early, and one of the first things I do is look at the new postings to get my day started right. I love the poetry that makes me think, reflect, ponder and smile. Your work makes my work a little easier. I enjoy reading you every day. Keep me smiling, Thank you, W.T. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Bluesy - Thanks so much! I drowned a long time ago in "them there" feelings. This is a ghost!  W.T. - Thank you! I think I'm stuck in a ritual of writing "it" out but, of course, I'm still trying to figure out what "it" is. Hmm? "Me" I suppose - yes, I reckon I'm "it" but I can't absolutely and totally figure it out. Helen |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a good one!!!! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
interesting progression, enjoyable read |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
~Always a delight to read your thoughts and thinking to any given subject of your fancy!~ Enjoyed Bunches of Sweet Honey Helen!!!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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