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Itemized Fury |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Positioning ammunition for my ultimate decision incisions created to keep optimal precision my delivery is a mystery haunted by memories remember these lyrical enemies in your memory arsenal of armory ready to conduct war like a harmony symphonies of bullets electrify lyrical artistry darkened trees believe chaos is in the air doctrines foretold apocalyptic despair unibombers with no honor terrorize lives defeated souls compromise weakened eyes society's rejection of tears is a false correction for the years of deception they have mistaken for protection lessons of life given to the forgiven, rejected by civilians millions are unenlightened, confused in the billions projected upon me is the ability to see vanity, pride, injustice, and tyranny secretly being taught within the educational walls subliminal messages with criminal calls all of this foreshadowed within the youth's reaction an onslaught of negative energy, accelerated with expansion is it because I'm forsaken that I'm shaking and quaking begging for my misdirection to finally awaken where the mistaken deity can talk to me secretly position me with the energy to keep moving easily furiously I burn my footsteps so I can walk in pain down the hallway of shattered dreams, where there's nothing to gain. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
xTr3m3sT~ Wow .. this is quite the heavy penning~ Lots and lots of things to be considered~ I see a lot of despair in your words .. quote:Though I don't understand a good deal of your ideas - I do disagree with the fact that- quote:I believe that there is always something to be gained as we walk though the despair to an enlightened view of the good things that life has to offer~ I will come back to read this again to see if other replies help me to understnd more of this .. or if you offer a response that explans this more clearly to me~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Sometimes, when I write, I go in some other state of consciousness, and I just let my mind stream on the paper. This is one of the productions of this state of mind. In response to your comment about ''there is nothing to gain'', I just recently broke up with my Ex, and that line was supposed to display how I am feeling about it. I hope this response will help you understand my words a little bit more -Angel |
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