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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-10-15 04:39 PM


Positioning ammunition for my ultimate decision
incisions created to keep optimal precision
my delivery is a mystery haunted by memories
remember these lyrical enemies in your memory
arsenal of armory ready to conduct war like a harmony
symphonies of bullets electrify lyrical artistry
darkened trees believe chaos is in the air
doctrines foretold apocalyptic despair
unibombers with no honor terrorize lives
defeated souls compromise weakened eyes
society's rejection of tears is a false correction
for the years of deception they have mistaken for protection
lessons of life given to the forgiven, rejected by civilians
millions are unenlightened, confused in the billions
projected upon me is the ability to see
vanity, pride, injustice, and tyranny
secretly being taught within the educational walls
subliminal messages with criminal calls
all of this foreshadowed within the youth's reaction
an onslaught of negative energy, accelerated with expansion
is it because I'm forsaken that I'm shaking and quaking
begging for my misdirection to finally awaken
where the mistaken deity can talk to me secretly
position me with the energy to keep moving easily
furiously I burn my footsteps so I can walk in pain
down the hallway of shattered dreams, where there's nothing to gain.

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1 posted 2008-10-15 10:13 PM


xTr3m3sT~
Wow .. this is quite the heavy penning~
Lots and lots of things to be considered~
I see a lot of despair in your words ..  
quote:
furiously I burn my footsteps so I can walk in pain
down the hallway of shattered dreams,
Though I don't understand a good deal of your ideas - I do disagree with the fact that-
quote:
there's nothing to gain.
I believe that there is always something to be gained as we walk though the despair to an enlightened view of the good things that life has to offer~

I will come back to read this again to see if other replies help me to understnd more of this .. or if you offer a response that explans this more clearly to me~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


  

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xTr3m3sT
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2 posted 2008-10-16 02:44 PM


Sometimes, when I write, I go in some other state of consciousness, and I just let my mind stream on the paper. This is one of the productions of this state of mind. In response to your comment about ''there is nothing to gain'', I just recently broke up with my Ex, and that line was supposed to display how I am feeling about it. I hope this response will help you understand my words a little bit more

-Angel  

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