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Rosary Greetings
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Rosary Greetings |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
This emptiness is followed by depression after successions of pre-determined suppressions logical corrections are discarded away in several seconds weapons inflicting wounds after the lashes beckons knowledge reckons that these rosary beads will plant the seeds to paint a picture in me scriptures indeed hear my whispers and pleads begging to bleed, so I may erase these horrible deeds listen to me, this crimson portrait of rage a venomous stage completed to display it's age sharpened horns are sworn to defeat my life twice the slice of the knife injects instant strife is it enough to fight for what you believe is right inept perspectives see me like I'm bright well let me give you something to consider there's always one thing that'll leave you bitter littered within consciousness lies feelings of loss spreading like moss, green with envy, simmering like sauce. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Angel, This long sentence is well constructed. Bobby |
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