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Once In The Night
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Once In The Night |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“ONCE IN THE NIGHT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Once in the night when moonbeams shone upon your face your eyes sparkled with the light and they danced with ecstasy, you said love me, and I did. Once in the night when moonbeams kissed the ocean your loving thoughts spoke to me, my heart danced with ecstasy, and with longing. Once in the night when lips touched and met with wanting desire, our breath was taken back within each, and breezes out of the shadows danced to soft whispers in rhyme. Once in the night when we met in lover’s rhapsody you said love me, and I did for the first time with hearts beating together, and in the night's glow all your warmth sang in melody... ~~~~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very warmful and enjoyable to read... regards yann |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
This was a beautiful post Bill and one that many will be able to relate to I am sure. Enjoyed. Rick |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ohhhhhh, this is soooo beautiful, Bill. I will read it over and over again. So good to read you again....... Hugs, Ethel |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this one will be read more than once...excellent write |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very romantic, Bill. Ida |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pretty song. Nice to have you back with us Bill. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
2islander2 - Appreciate you reading this, and for the kind words... Rick - Thank you for the reply. I believe many may relate also... Garysgirl - It's good to be back writing once again. Now if my muse doesn't shut down that is. Thanks for reading, and for your comments... Steavenr - thank you for the kind words, and hoping many do read this one... Marchmadness - I love to write of romance, many more to come on these blue pages... Thanks again all for replying... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, Looks like B.C. is good for your heart. The romantic side at least. I'm a native Washingtonian and am persuaded that where you are now is like Washington, only a little more so. Now how can you go wrong with that? Besides you're near Sharon. Now I really am jealous!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
What a lovely night read. A |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ No matter where you spill your romantic ink, you are always in synch with such devoted thoughts~ Too good to see you Bill ... keep us suspened in such loving thoughts! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry - Yes, B.C. seems to be good for a lot of things, romance in the mountains, wow. Can't go wrong up here, just too beautiful for words. H'mmmmmm, Sharon be here? Alison - Glad you enjoyed the read, more to come... Marge - At times I wonder where those thoughts come from, must be a romantic muse in there somewhere. Good to see you also... BC |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Oh, how beautiful! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Oklahoma Rose - thank you for replying to this write. A'hhhh romance, love to write about it... BC |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Bill that is such a delightful, poignant poem, I read it twice. tender and enchanting. Thanks for posting. Lindsay |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I feel the warmth of your write, Bill. So good to read you again~~ and where are you now????  M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ah, dear Bill, I enjoyed reading you. You are very beautifully and romantically inspired. So good to have you back! Love, Margherita  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill...Great to read you once again, it's been awhile. I see you're still wooing the ladies with your romantic writings. Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lindsay - thank you for stopping by for a read, and for the kind words... Nakdthoughts - the warmth is always there, weather in words, or for real. Thanks for coming by... Margherita - at times I wonder where it all comes from, but I'm thankful it's there. Thanks for the reply.. Paul - really good to see you again. More to come... BC |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Many nights have passed since such a one for me... but to have experienced it once is to remember forever. Beautiful, loving write!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
suthern - to experience it is divine, and too remember forever. Thank you for your thoughts... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's so nice to read a long-time friend once again! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This very romantic poem is well put together. I like it loads. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
BC - I enjoyed your poem very much and the comments. You don't know where it comes from? I can answer that if you'd like but not wanting to wait for a reply I'll tell you that it comes from "love". Yeah - it's always around making sure its message gets across. Helen |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm... I'm swooning here Bill! This is very beautiful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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