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Darkness Beckons. . .
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Darkness Beckons. . . |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Darkness eats and swallows me whole it's out of control, falling quickly inside this hole watching as this game of life unfolds my mind blacks out, my body gets cold flashes of light leaves gashes on my soul intangible omnipresence guides my weakened stroll Slipping and falling while walking in the pathways of reality with this brutality and these abnormalities I question my mortality thoughts raises questions, questions raises tensions tensions raises suspicion, and suspicion raises attention so why bother trying to find your own answers when answers will duplicate doubts like cancer necromancers symbolize rising from death dying for breath I wish to be revived with meth friending for the truth, my mind does furiously scream as the purest form of truth is divided in a dozen light beams scattered completely around the world, begging to be found in a place where there's no sound, six feet in the ground. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Wow, that's deep. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Angel, I'd go over this and try to add a little more structure. Bobby |
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sklagurl17 Junior Member
since 2008-09-08
Posts 43nc. |
This is brutal yet full of imagery. But i understand where your coming from. -Tabitha. |
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