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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
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0 posted 2008-10-10 11:37 PM



My Master

Holding my extremities by thin lines, while
My unstrung head lies low, facing the stage floor
Doing with me your every waking desire
I have no control…no control

No one can witness the excruciating pain
You send through the nerves and spirit of my body
You are hidden above with your wooden sticks
That attach to the strings of my mobility

[This message has been edited by ILoveTheRain (10-11-2008 11:42 PM).]

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SkaaDee
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since 2008-04-07
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1 posted 2008-10-11 12:03 PM



this is startlingly good.
you are a poet.

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