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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-10-10 01:12 AM




You said
I intrigued you
and wanted to know more
I said
there was nothing
else to see
but if you liked
we could
make the laughter count
so that the moments
in between the end
could last a little longer...


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2008 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2008-10-10 04:31 AM


Roniece~
Awww ... the intrigue always leads to more ...~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

My Native American Indian Poetry
http://www.wcnet.org/~bro13256/marge.html
http://www.wcnet.org/~bro13256/marge2.html

A Poetic Journey
http://www.apoeticjourney.com/view/?pageID=369288

The Softer Side of a Romantic Marge
http://www.artgally.com/marget/

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~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-10-10 04:39 AM


thank you again my dear Marge... and thank you for the links to your amazing poetry!  wow, you are truly a beautiful poet...


now, I can't work out how my pic has changed, I had a new one but now it has disappeared?? hmmm... Ron... help me please???     

love
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2008-10-10 05:48 AM


HeyGal~
If you added a new pic recently ... just give it time to show up ... cyber-space is tempramental like that~

If it wsas removed for whatever reason ... drop Ron, or Nan, an email and I'm sure either he or Nan can help you figure it out~

Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed my little links ... sometimes folks don't know you're out there ... so I just wanted to share some of my poetic ink~
SHARING is why I write~

My Native American Indian Poetry
http://www.wcnet.org/~bro13256/marge.html
http://www.wcnet.org/~bro13256/marge2.html

A Poetic Journey
http://www.apoeticjourney.com/view/?pageID=369288

The Softer Side of a Romantic Marge
http://www.artgally.com/marget/

Member :  National Museum of Women In The Arts
Author of :  Out of the Whispering Winds

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

Rick
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4 posted 2008-10-10 06:45 AM


Wonderful lines here Roniece, enjoyed my friend.

Rick

1slick_lady
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5 posted 2008-10-10 08:31 AM


"we could
make the laughter count"

now that is what love is about

love the new pic btw

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-10-10 08:58 AM


Yo dear RDB,

This is an intriguing little poem.  It a lovely picture too.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2008-10-10 12:48 PM


Roniece Dawson-Bruce - these words should be in a romantic greeting card, just lovely. I did like this write...

BC

2islander2
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8 posted 2008-10-10 05:59 PM


Hello Roniece, this is delightful, and I agree that at some time there is no reason to seek anything in our alter egos....

enjoyed very much

hugs

  yann

OwlSA
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9 posted 2008-10-12 04:35 AM


I enjoyed this for so many reasons.  Lovely.

- Owl

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2008-10-12 09:28 AM


the intrique of a blonde goddess

is endless

The Lady
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11 posted 2008-10-15 02:07 PM




"so that the moments
in between the end
could last a little longer..."

wonderfully written Roniece

the new picture is beautiful

LindsayP
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12 posted 2008-10-15 10:41 PM



Dear Roniece, they will be sweet moments too.
Quite a cute poem my dear. Love

Lindsay

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13 posted 2008-10-15 11:00 PM


Wonderful Penning there, lovely RDB!


ARCTIC WIND

steavenr
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14 posted 2008-10-16 08:20 PM


there's a great philosphy in how you ended this...nice write
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15 posted 2008-10-18 01:20 AM


Roniece,

I almost missed this one.  Thank God, I didn't because I fell in love with it.  It's perfect.

You know I love you.

A

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2008-10-21 07:08 PM


Wonderful...James
secondhanddreampoet
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17 posted 2008-10-21 07:18 PM


fine and interesting 'write'!

applause!!

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