Open Poetry #43 |
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Moments of Perfection |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Moments of Perfection Those moments I felt closest to her were the times we were driving to work together, on the radio listening to our favorite songs, at times singing along and during the nicest of conversations she would offer me her hand, and her hand seemed to fit so nicely into mine and I could feel all of her warmth and affection within those special moments of perfection. JamesLee 05October 2008 Don't worry, my darling is still around, just far away for now... |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Good work James. You've nicely illustrated the old saying of "Absence makes the heart grow fonder". Glad to hear you have those thoughts and feelings still. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
She must have loved reading this one, James! Very sweet romantic thoughts. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi James, enjoyed very much your moments of perfection listening to Jazz... have a nice day yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think this is so very romantic and lovely, dear James. Love, Margherita ![]() "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
lovely James... this is beautiful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
There is always that moment to shine, peacefulness, love, caring, and wonderful moments of peoples lives! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you've captured one of those unsung, quiet, specially casual moments that speaks volumes in those great relationships...beautifully, I might add...enjoying |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
James, Both hands on the steering wheel James, and both eyes on the road. Nice one James. Bobby |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks for sharing the moment~ You are a true romantic, and I love that!! |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it ![]() |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - you write very well about connecting, especially in this write... BC |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
She sounds like a lovely lady James, next time she offers you her hand slip a ring on her finger. Good luck my friend. Lindsay |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such moments are perfection... even when viewed through memory's lens. *S* Great write! *S* |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very simple, honest, pleasant, and fine Romanticism! applause! |
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