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Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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Oklahoma USA

0 posted 2008-10-09 10:24 PM



Memories Stay

It seems my heart is hurting me today
Memories seem to always stay with me
Sometimes this life of mine doesn't feel okay

The anger it seems never goes away
Inside my heart it seems there is no peace
The hurt and anger seems to always stay

I sit here list'ning to the music play
Remembering when there was still a we
It was my heart that you chose to betray

There were too many things that got in our way
But you were just too blind to even see
You filled my life with so much dismay

I am the one you see who had to pay
From you though I had to set myself free
There was no way that I could even stay

There were those days when I would try to pray
It did no good that I could even see
It seems my heart is hurting me today
Sometimes this life of mine doesn't feel okay

10-9-08


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1 posted 2008-10-09 10:46 PM


SweetSue~
Yes, some days just suck the life right out of us~
Then we take those memories and closely look at them and figure out just why they cause us such pain ... and in the knowing we learn just why we turned and walked away from it all .. the hurt just wasn't worth the pain ... nope, it sure wasn't~

Bleed it out in word therapy dear friend!
It helps ... it really does~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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sklagurl17
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since 2008-09-08
Posts 43
nc.
2 posted 2008-10-10 12:25 PM


It becomes shocking news.
We feel so upset and alone.
But we learn from it and move on.

Great write.
-Tabitha.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-10-10 06:43 AM


my sweet Sue... this is a heartfelt write and I feel your pain.. sending some of my special hugs your way my friend...

love RDB xxxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-10-13 06:17 PM


A heartfelt Write Indeed!


ARCTIC WIND

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