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HopeS
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0 posted 2008-10-09 11:51 AM






I Just Wanted You To Know

Are you planning to write
Maybe you had nothing to say
I have not written either
Though I thought of you today

I was still longing to write
Knowing time was passing by
If I was to remain silent
Would you be wondering why

Should I continue to write
Perhaps I had left this too late
Was it worthwhile asking
Did you want to communicate

I tell myself I should write
Still would it get me anywhere
I just wanted you to know
Silence has been hard to bear


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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-10-09 12:43 PM


quote:
If I was to remain silent
Would you be wondering why




A doubt dear Hope that probably many have ...

You write beautifully!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

LindsayP
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2 posted 2008-10-09 08:49 PM



Dear Hope, for peace of mind sit down and write today. remember nothing ventured nothing gained. Love to you my dear.

Lindsay

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2008-10-09 10:49 PM


Hope~
You word-weep so poignantly~
This cries softly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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sklagurl17
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since 2008-09-08
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4 posted 2008-10-10 12:23 PM


This is a revelation to my soul.
Im going to sit and write this letter.
Thank You.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-10-10 05:15 AM


oh yes dear Hope... write, write, write! I'm definitely with our lovely friend Lindsay on this one!   love and hugs.. RDB xxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
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Victoria, Australia
6 posted 2008-10-10 07:00 AM


HopeS, silence seems to be the norm very often and it is a hard habit to break, drifting apart without words to say, writing is often easier but too truthful, just my thought. Thanks for sharing your words and bringing to mind these thoughts my friend, be well and take care.

Rick

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2008-10-10 12:50 PM


Hope - how well I know of the silence, you tell of it well in your write...

BC

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