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Open Poetry #43

An Autumn Love Song

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2008-10-07 07:43 PM

An Autumn Love Song

Summer is gone
Winter comes near
Autumn leaves a turning
Turning like a fire

I walk past the fire
Which falls like red rain drops
Slow, red rain drops falling
Around me life's color
Is not my own to hold

So beautiful are red...
Red rain drops from the sky
But these are not rain drops
They are dry and dead leaves

Crunchy, crunchy, crunchy
Red rain drops fall from trees
A smell of musk, cool air
Trees cry and children play

Crunchy, crunchy, crunchy

Their parents raked them up
Neat little leaf piles
Of red, crunchy raindrops

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

1 posted 2008-10-08 01:02 AM

Very nice write, I particularly liked the ending.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

kanashe
Member

since 2008-05-21

Posts 59
america

2 posted 2008-10-09 03:38 PM

i enjoyed this a lot

-ashe

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