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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2008-10-07 12:51 PM

Hold me now
I'm scared
it's time for sleep
I'm not prepared
for nightmares
and waking up again
to see how I fared.

Hold me now
I'm bitter cold
from all the dreams
we bought and sold
knowing if we kept them
for too long
they would grow old.

Hold me now
keep me still
silence the voices
of fear until
I can find forgiveness
between loss and grief
beyond the ache
of the chill.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-10-07 01:29 AM

Pretty incredible poem, my friend. I am glad that you are back. I miss you when you are gone too long.

A

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-10-07 03:07 AM

good to read you again...excellent poem...loved the line:

"beyond the ache
of the chill."

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-10-07 05:14 AM

Dixie... amazing write my friend... it makes me want to give you a long hug... love RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2008-10-07 05:36 AM

My heart has never, won't ever . . . turn you loose my friend - on that you can count.
Other than that I really liked this piece and am always envious of the way you say so much in rhyme.

jimmy

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2008-10-07 09:06 AM

thank you each

your comments are always touching

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2008-10-07 10:16 AM

Holding you in my heart dear friend

Hugs Hope

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2008-10-07 11:14 AM

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2008-10-07 12:18 PM

passing shadows,

Keep your heart in your poetry, it will warm you in the night...

BC

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2008-10-07 03:57 PM

awesome write my friend

:

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2008-10-12 11:05 AM

Oh, hon... how well I understand every single word!!!

Wonderfully written plea from the heart!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2008-10-13 12:26 PM

Dixie~
Thought you were gone again .. glad to see you made it another short trip~

Nice emote of penning~

*Huglet*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

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