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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Tear Drops The droplets born of little pains Like drizzles from the sky Were tears to easy brush away Beneath a moistened eye Those tears that rose from deep within That by my foot would fall Were raindrops soaked into the soil That grew my stature tall Elizabeth Santos |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awww this touched |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Elizabeth, Always touching, as you do... Nice write... BC |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Elizabeth, this is such a tender and softly written poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Hugs, Ethel Ethel's Creations My Inspirational Pages Powered by CGISpy.com |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is really good...loved the imagery as well as the theme...just plain good...but not plain at all |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Awwww, this sounds like a sad one. Beautifully written, as usual. But, sad/ |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Those tears that rose from deep within That by my foot would fall Were raindrops soaked into the soil That grew my stature tall I love your wtiting Elizabeth and this is no exception. Take a bow dear lady. Lindsay |
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