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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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perhaps if I'm lucky you'll pucker slightly the french doors that are your mouth and mine and yours will touch wrapping me in an incandescent sense of happiness that will last for days I'll have some of your coffee So that I'll taste only you and your citrus sweet neatness That I may remember you when you leave me forever, again. ____________________________________ -The Sadie Series- Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sad |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
A little. There's always the story of the one that got away. But that one's almost always the biggest fish in the pond! Dang, life always has to work that way, huh. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
don't worry it gets better besides i read a quote today that said, "to have a rainbow you have to have the rain" |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Too much rain, or too little, yields naught but muddy ground. No rainbows yet, but that doesn't mean I'm not looking at the sky! Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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I am definitely buttin' in here. (she's as far away as I am...*battin' lashes*) Great poem. but bad coffee... I know coffee. Your next penning should be something about "fresh beans". mmmm hmmmmm nudging Helen, 'cause she knows hint: talk French doors to me baby! (I live for louvers!) YAY!!! nice poem  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
So is there some sort of sexual connection between you and french roast coffee? I am confunkled. And sadie is about 3 hours drive. If you can beat that distance, I'll find a way to make you fall in love with me... ,,,love potion number nine.... -Paul  Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
A good piece that is sweet in detail, especially the coffee kisses. |
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