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viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2008-10-05 11:28 PM


perhaps if I'm lucky
you'll pucker slightly the french doors
that are your mouth
and mine and yours will touch

wrapping me
in an incandescent
sense of happiness
that will last for days

I'll have some of your coffee
So that I'll taste only you
and your citrus sweet
neatness

That I may remember you
when you leave me forever, again.
____________________________________
-The Sadie Series-

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

© Copyright 2008 Paul Weisbrod - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2008-10-05 11:35 PM


sad
viking_metal
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2 posted 2008-10-05 11:38 PM


A little.

There's always the story of the one that got away.

But that one's almost always the biggest fish in the pond!

Dang, life always has to work that way, huh.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2008-10-05 11:49 PM


don't worry it gets better

besides i read a quote today that said, "to have a rainbow you have to have the rain"

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
4 posted 2008-10-06 12:00 PM


Too much rain, or too little, yields naught but muddy ground.

No rainbows yet, but that doesn't mean I'm not looking at the sky!

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2008-10-06 07:08 AM


I am definitely buttin' in here.

(she's as far away as I am...*battin' lashes*)

Great poem.

but bad coffee...

I know coffee. Your next penning should be something about "fresh beans".

mmmm hmmmmm

nudging Helen, 'cause she knows

hint: talk French doors to me baby!

(I live for louvers!) YAY!!!

nice poem

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
6 posted 2008-10-06 02:55 PM


So is there some sort of sexual connection between you and french roast coffee?

I am confunkled.

And sadie is about 3 hours drive. If you can beat that distance, I'll find a way to make you fall in love with me...

,,,love potion number nine....

-Paul

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Earl Brinkman
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Osaka, Japan
7 posted 2010-05-18 08:56 PM


A good piece that is sweet in detail, especially the coffee kisses.
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