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SkaaDee
Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116
Canada

0 posted 2008-10-05 10:09 PM



gentlemen
ladies

those who wish well

those who carry candles
into this night

lit
with flames
thought lost.

what is the mind  
of a body in free fall
- crutches kicked out  

will attempts be made
to grasp again
what just betrayed

will there be clawing
and cheating

lying
greed  

or is this the time to realise winged flight.

things
I've gathered
during this wait
I've called life

especially those I would hold
ten seconds before
an eruption

are

my life.


the face of the man with the bill
will rise up out of the ash and cloud
demanding his payment
in denominations of fear
and chaos

shock and panic

and
shattered disbelief

but on the way to the floor
some open their eyes
reach out
see the world anew
spot themselves
in the mirror of the moon

take heart
some become birds.

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-10-06 01:13 PM


Food for thought.
             Ida

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-10-07 02:23 AM


It is from the mud of despair, that hope can unfold, that the good can take wing, and that courage can reach forever upwards, exploring the blue, blue skies . . . the choice is ours.  

Lovely, especially the gently powerful last lines.  

- Owl

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