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Open Poetry #43
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2008-10-05 08:51 AM

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Flights of geese
Pass overhead

Unsaddled a horse
Grazes a grassy field

Now
There’s nowhere to go
And nothing to do

An autumn wind
Carrying colored leaves
Brushes across the sea


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turbulent_melody
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since 2008-10-01
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1 posted 2008-10-05 10:01 AM

Very somber and atmospheric.  There is a feeling of someone doing their deed for the day whilst others around them are still pressing on, despite a less than optimistic outlook.  Thoroughly enjoyed.
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