Open Poetry #43 |
Gather |
Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Did I happen to Along this way Fall in love with you With trite dismay Was just the sun Setting for dusk Or ironically done Foreshadowing luck Were the gathering grey Clouds rolling in Obligatory shades Impending ruin Consequently After thoughts do Enlighten and bring Some reason for you Gather the feelings Gather the tears Gather the reasons As our love...... disappears -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- c2008 vduna Inspired-8 [This message has been edited by Inspired-8 (10-05-2008 07:22 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Victor... this is beautiful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Inspired-8, An inspired write, love today, gone tomorrow. You said it well... BC |
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