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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto

0 posted 2008-10-05 02:28 AM



Did I happen to

Along this way

Fall in love with you

With trite dismay


Was just the sun

Setting for dusk

Or ironically done

Foreshadowing luck


Were the gathering grey

Clouds rolling in

Obligatory shades

Impending ruin


Consequently

After thoughts do

Enlighten and bring

Some reason for you


Gather the feelings

Gather the tears

Gather the reasons

As our love...... disappears


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c2008 vduna


Inspired-8

[This message has been edited by Inspired-8 (10-05-2008 07:22 AM).]

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-10-05 04:59 AM


Victor... this is beautiful!

love
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2008-10-05 12:47 PM


Inspired-8,

An inspired write, love today, gone tomorrow. You said it well...

BC

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