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cool night breezes
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cool night breezes |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
cool night breezes, cooler than the night before darkness hushes the breath of fall like drizz'ling rain quiets the forest floor ere the sun-lit rays ever come to call and hopes dampen 'fore the morning breaks as silence o'ertakes its soft refrain and gives and gives yet never takes shadow-shelters from a misting rain while the nightsongs whisper in a hushed, low voice while the soft calls linger like a lullaby when being in the midst is a certain choice watching clouds dance and drift 'cross the sky like old-maid patrons at a fancy ball waiting for a dreamspace curtain call cool breezes blowing, night lights glowing rain's refreshing like a quick redressing labored late breezes on a cool night, fall |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Night takes on a laquer this time of year. The chill is almost icing on the grass. The best for cuddling up in front of good fire, good wine...good book. Good write! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love the night, I am a night person!!! ~All the fresh cool winds and the meadows flowers moving back and forth, and you're one with the full moon ~and all is silent~ That is a night to remember~ Good night to all! It's time for me to hit the bed! and dream about everything about the meadow! thank you for this wonderful write and thoughts before bed, I hope it brings a nice picture into my head tonight!  ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
steavenr - love nights in the fall especially, cool, crisp, and a touch of stillness... BC |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"shadow-shelters from a misting rain" Very cool phrase here. I adore fall, it is just so crisp, and you have represented here well in your uniquely romanticized way. Enjoyed! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Steaven, I love how this reads -- and it is beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Alison |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, sounds wonderful...thank you for taking the time to read and comment so nicely Artic, though late in saying thank you, I can only hope that your night images were indeed beautiful James, thank you...always a pleasure to be read Bill, sounds like we like some of the same things...thank you for reading...thanks for the reply Janette, once again, you have chosen one of my favorites...thank you kindly...glad it spoke to you in a special way Alison, you are far too generous, but I thank you for reading and commenting |
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