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Open Poetry #43

Don't Take Love Away

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2008-10-03 05:50 PM

Don't Take Love Away

Don't take love away
From us
Make this love last forever
Don't take this love away
Love is so precious
Let us make this love
For a day and forever
Don't take this love away
Love stands high
And when leaves falls down
On the ground
In circles round and round
Find this love so precious
When autumn night comes
The moon shimmer slowly
to the sea
Still you feel love is so precious
Don't take love away
from us

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-10-03 07:27 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

This is a very nice poem.

Love Bobby

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2008-10-03 09:40 PM

Keep growing Vandana, each year you grow
and become better at what you write.

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

3 posted 2008-10-03 09:43 PM

enjoyed your poem.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-10-04 01:11 PM

reminds me of a song...maybe Bobby Vinton?

oh, I like Bobby Vinton...nice write...well done

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