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Daifu
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. October light Comes into the room Strolls around Looking at paintings On the walls Touches figures Of bronze and marble Considers the books Beside my bed Then goes outside Saying as it leaves Well my son You’ve done good . |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I think I need to re-think this. Help me, please. I looked up daifu and found that it was the Mandarin word for doctor. Is this how you used it? |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Steve, http://www.freedict.com/onldict/jap.html John . |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
You're rapidly becoming one of my favorite PiP poets, Huan. Another softly spoken but extremely moving and powerful poem. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Very good, God-Father, make us work for it. As a good teacher should. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love the way the light strolls around,touching and considering. This is just a great poem. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thank you for the link...after reading (and absorbing) again, I found it far more spiritual than I did before...very thought provoking |
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