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kanashe
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since 2008-05-21
Posts 59
america

0 posted 2008-10-03 10:01 AM


Sticks and stones
purple bones
let the worlds collide
pungent smells
hells bells
cant you tell they're baking just outside?

Scarlet red
found half dead
on dirt as black as night
keep crawling forward
until you can see
the light that shines so white.

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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-10-03 11:40 AM


powerful...viceral...poignant...interesting write
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-10-03 02:27 PM


Wow!, hard hitting, Kanashe.
                      Ida

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