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Open Poetry #43

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kanashe
Member

since 2008-05-21

Posts 59
america

0 posted 2008-10-01 02:22 PM

this lonely street,
your empty seat,
remind me of you
in the ground so deep,
sleep my darling sleep
and let me be your
neverending dream

these old photograps
your empty room
remind me of a time
when our love was new
nothing
no one could seperate our hearts
until the final day
you ripped my whole world apart

the old park
where we used to go
reminds me of your sweet face
of the way you seemed to glow

holding hands and making plans
our connection was severed by the murderous hands
of another man
my heart will never beat
for anyone else my loving friend
it was truly beautiful what we had
what we had until the end

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-10-01 06:17 PM

Sadness moves through your words and reaches the heart.

Well rendered emotions.

Love,
Margherita

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