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Black Tie
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Black Tie |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Black Tie Fascination entwined within my fingers The trails that luster made still lingers To smile the knotted throat of ingenuity Light the spark of insightful gratuity Tailored to chest, a cut close revival of sin Fitted to form, dark and light compliment to the hem Copious distinction smoothed to my touch On discovery’s palette swept of color and clutch A litigious journey aroused into speech Discord of bows left in baubles beseech Cross over salutations Loop under gravitational pull Of the man, figures grand, stature full Hold the French doors aloft, to allow breezes soft While we waltz in bare feet on the beach Copyright Kkh 9/30/08 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Some times I save you just for the savoring... smile? Don't tell me, because I'd like to think that the tie was the entire wardrobe... mmm. :devil. hmmm yes'm!  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
last line was a clincher...thoroughly enjoyed |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have always said the beach is the best dance floor around and you give credibility to that thought. As always a delight to read. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond, You write as I remember, touching, and with your words flowing. The beach, great place for a dance... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill took away the thought...Yes, but watch out for broken glass..Kevlar socks?? |
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