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Open Poetry #43
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kanashe
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since 2008-05-21
Posts 59
america
0 posted 2008-09-30 02:58 PM

you gave me something today
wuth your sweet laughter
you touched my heart

you gave me sunshine today
with your brilliant smile
you touched my soul

you took something from me today
with your intense stares
you took my sadness

you took something from me today
with your tender touch
you took my love
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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-09-30 04:47 PM

Yo Kanashe,

The thought behind this is very nice.

Bobby
steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058
2 posted 2008-09-30 11:35 PM

liked the structure, the form and the content...very nicely done
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