Open Poetry #43 |
Bones Knows Nothing |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones knows nothing about you. He has no idea what you have. You don’t have to be afraid of Bones breaking in and stealing your “stuff”. He has no idea what “stuff’s all about. If he did, he might think about it. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bobby, I like the playing with stuff which could be anything, even moral or psycho stuff....Thanks for the good work... yann |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Nice one. Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, For the very kind words on this poem. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Paul, I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
can't figure out if Bones is limited or led by fate...does it constrain him without controlling him or does it control him without constraining him--still, loved your work |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Steavenr, I think you would have to say that Bones is completely controlled by fate. Bobby |
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