Open Poetry #43 |
Bones Goes Into "Care" |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones turns eleven years old. The welfare people decide that Mom’s not taking good care of him. She’s not feeding him enough. The night they took Bones away was not a pretty scene. What with both Bones and Mom, carrying on, crying and screaming. The people they gave Bones to, treated him rotten. They wanted him to work all the time, and did strange stuff to him. Bones didn’t like the place at all. He ran away as soon as he could, and went back to find Mom. Bones and Mom made sure the welfare couldn’t find him again. Bones basically disappeared from the face of the earth. Bones was soon forgotten by everyone, except for Mom. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Like I told you before, I have observed foster care and think it sucks. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, Yes, foster care is very much a gamble for a kid. Some time you strike it rich, but not often. Love Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
EXCELLENT indictment of a cruelly flawed system! As I also restated on Del's most recent 'write', I am glad that a fine few still have the 'right stuff' to do these "social impact/conscience" and "reality therapy" writes...that should be a 'must read' for everyone about all those trapped (and trampled) by this "Runaway American Dream" applause! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Secondhanddreampoet, Yes, it is a cruelly flawed system. There is too much money in it for people that don’t care for the children. It’s much better to keep kids in their home, with adequate money for their care, even if it a little bit. Well funded, properly supervised orphanages are also a good idea. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Bobby, there is a lot of suffering, your poem touches me....Always are interesting stories.... have a nice day yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, Thanks for caring about Bones. Bobby |
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chopsticks Senior Member
since 2007-10-02
Posts 888The US, |
Yes, foster care is very much a gamble for a kid. Some time you strike it rich, but not often. Right again Bobby, and the kid has no say in the matter. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Chopsticks, What you say is very true. No one listens to the kid. Bobby |
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