tantalizing doesn't even cover it

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Open Poetry #43

tantalizing doesn't even cover it

kanashe
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since 2008-05-21

Posts 59
america

0 posted 2008-09-25 04:31 PM

startled into wakefulness
by the bright and shining sun
a soft hum fills my sleepy ears
beating like a drum
your snoring is like a foggy lullaby
singing me swiftly back to sleep
i smile a genuine smile
i keep only for you
i whisper softly in the yellow light
to your unconsious form snuggled next to me
three soft word
"i love you"

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2008-09-25 06:30 PM

This is sweet.
Welcome to Passions

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-09-25 07:46 PM

Enjoyed...James

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-09-25 07:51 PM

Kanashe,

The thought behind this poem is very good.

Bobby

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

4 posted 2008-09-25 09:28 PM

LOL, I've never heard snoring described that way. Nice write, kanashe.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2008-09-25 11:34 PM

"i smile a genuine smile
i keep only for you"

I know that smile...'tis a good feeling...welcome to PiP

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

6 posted 2008-09-26 09:54 AM

How tender and touching! When even the snoring becomes music to our ears, then it surely is LOVE.

A little gem, that brings smiles.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

kanashe
Member

since 2008-05-21

Posts 59
america

7 posted 2008-10-01 02:50 PM

thank u all so much for the wonderful comments and the welcomes^^

-ashe

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