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Open Poetry #43

After landing to L.A

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2008-09-23 02:49 PM

After landing to L.A
we rent a car,
a buick or a G.M,
I don’t really remember,
then sought for a motel
and found a crap
far away from Wilshire Boulevard,
cheap, convenient but not quiet,
enough for packing tomorrows
and buy hopes and munch
greasy cheesaburgers,
The following day
we walked round Hollywood Boulevard
and loosed our illusions,
hello, is there any star here ?
We felt as it was us...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2008-09-23 04:01 PM

Hollywood Blvd is a big disappointment for most tourists. If you visited the studios, you might catch a glimpse of a star, but it is easier to spot them in the Beverly Hills shopping center, or in Malibu.
Hope you had a pleasant visit overall!

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-09-23 04:05 PM

Yo 2islander2,

This is very nice.

LA is okay, but the foods better in Santa Barbara.

Bobby

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-09-23 04:12 PM

quote:
hello, is there any star here ?
We felt as it was us...

What an absolutely perfect ending!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-09-23 06:20 PM

Know what you mean...I like Santa Monica...James

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